Tuesday, August 4, 2009

Metaphor Poem- Magical Predator

My friend is a panther,
Invisible under the night sky's,
She run's magically,
Like you've never seen,
Her skin is dark,
And her beauty shines,
Her hair is black and glossy,
A colour which is one-of-a-kind,
She is a panther,
Her name is Samantha.

7 comments:

peopleperson1 said...

Jaz
i LUV this poem!!! it is so good
u used diferent words 2 every1 else
and thats wat made it really special
from my point of veiw it is 1 of the best poems in the class
good job jasmin
bibi =p

crazystrawberry13 said...

thnx xx

peopleperson1 said...

omg
i luvd ur 'about me' part
thanx so much jasmin
luv u and u'll always b my bestie
bibi =p

P.S.
u shld put sum more posts up there
cos i no they'll b really good!

peopleperson1 said...
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peopleperson1 said...

u shld put ur free verse poem and ur haikus up there jasmin
there r absolutely awesome!!!

whatev1 said...

if impredetor....

ur my PREY!!!

miss_lolly said...

thatz really good jasmin